Smile

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  • Happiness
    • Brad1
    • Wow how life is fuel for the scribes.

    Smile

    Ever since we met, I haven't been the same.
    My heart keeps telling me that it will never change.
    If you need me half as much as I need you.
    Then we're gonna make it, so all you need to do is ...

    Smile, cause there's someone who loves you.
    Smile, cause I'm the one who cares.
    Smile, cause there's so much I can show you.
    Smile, cause I'll always be there.

    I want to dance with you til this world ends.
    I want to stare in your eyes and forever be friends.
    I want to wake up with you by my side.
    We wont ever break up so you dont need to hide
    that....

    Smile, cause there's someone who loves you.
    Smile, cause I'm the one who cares.
    Smile, cause there's so much I can show you.
    Smile, cause I'll always be there.

                             (-:Smile :-)

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    Sydney commented on Smile

    03-03-2010

    wow, this is really great. a good poem for the month of February but also for the years to come. Sydney
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    Brad1

    03/03/2010

    as if I thought this one had dust on it, you refreshed it with your comment, TY! (((Smiling Yet))))?

    Brad1

    05/25/2010

    Thanks, I got lucky with this one.

    knight4696 commented on Smile

    10-02-2009

    Hey Brad - This one is a nice change from some of your others. Not to say that the others are bad, it's just more uplifting and has a great beat. Love the simplicity and rhythym! Good Job!
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    mdpoetgirl commented on Smile

    10-02-2009

    Excellent rhythm... could definitely be a song! The words are so soft, full of emotion, and endearing. Great job, man.
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    lsabeth commented on Smile

    09-28-2009

    I like this poem it is very good. I am just a beginner at writing but, I learning how to write from reading poems like yours and the other people here.
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    SuperChick76 commented on Smile

    09-28-2009

    Well, the first thing I noticed is grammar. The second comma should be a semi-colen, and "cause" should be " 'cause" and there should be a commage after "break up" and before "so." That's it. BUT! It was a very, very happy poem and I liked it very much. Good job, my friend!
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    Brad1

    09/28/2009

    what is a commage. Im new at writing and apoligize for ignorance.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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