So Lonely She be

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    So Lonely She be

    She is always seen,
    Her words ... seldom cherished
    Her help mistakenly perishes
    Her heart torn apart
    Her spirit discerns dark
    but She sways anchored to the start

    Awaiting body, Abiding soul, Expecting understanding
    She grieves to the apple of a man's eye!
    Her pitied soul cries out, while her inner spirit dies...Excessive clot
    So lonely, lonely she be where oh where is he?
    So lonely She be

    Ordinary fine and tastefully proper
    Appealingly pleasing, up to now attractively seasoned
    Delicate, Sensitive ... Exactly precise
    Critical is She when messed over more than twice!, yet
    Shallow is He equipped with only device.
    He hunter, She prey forbidden love together they lay?
    So lonely, lonely she be and Aone, alone is he
    So lonely She be

    Two bodies one soul, God's love story still to behold
    Her perfections are pure, His direction meet unsure
    Her picture communicate obsure, His canvass determined detour
    Her door is sealed from his allure
    His soul must conquer God's exclusive cure!
    Alone is he, so Lonely She be
    If we can consider we, no longer would we be
    He alone, She lonely!
    Alone is He, So lonely she be


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    magati commented on So Lonely She be

    09-13-2011

    indeed, thy words do bring the sadness in lonilyness of a broken trust.......it even makes me sad within......

    Ming commented on So Lonely She be

    12-09-2010

    Love this , I can feel the pain, the loneliness , the longing. . However I can even see beyond all that, to the betrayals, and mistrusts, Wanting to trust and being afraid, yet not wanting to be alone, but still afraid. There's so much in here that is unintended, yet, expressed all the same. Being alone or lonely is just half the truth, there's more beyond the lines, beyond the words. I love it when a writer , writes from the soul, then all sorts of truths are revealed. . . -Ming

    Spacer commented on So Lonely She be

    02-14-2009

    Great use of Allegory....great POem

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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