Someone

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  • Sadness

    Someone
    Spinning in a whirlpool,
    drenched in emotion
    Being torn to pieces
    so much want
    so much need
    too much to handle
    thought to end it
    tried it twice
    didn't catch on
    decided to live
    didn't want to
    but got over it
    all alone
    only me for help
    i'm so lost
    i don't know what to do
    where to go
    i need someone
    to get me through it
    no one offers
    so secluded
    please
    there's not much left
    no one knows
    because no one cares
    they're all just there
    to make me laugh
    they couldn't understand
    what i'm going through
    professional help
    it wont do shit
    i need someone
    i care about
    who cares about me
    but he doesn't exist
    this pain
    these scars
    are mine to bear
    and mine alone
    im drowning
    in an ocean
    of myself

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    XxPoeticxSoulxX commented on Someone

    06-29-2009

    i been there..done that...tried it five times and obviously failed. great one.
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    Rushme commented on Someone

    04-16-2009

    really touchy!!
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    WordSlinger commented on Someone

    04-12-2009

    this is open, opening up yur heart, and u must be the someone, and this poem is touching, leading, 2 all
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    Rainz commented on Someone

    03-22-2009

    Your best work by far. I've been there before. You tough it through man, no other way.
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    ladyd37 commented on Someone

    03-17-2009

    this is deep!!
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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