Spotlight

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Spotlight

Spotlight

 

Crowd hailed

The light roused

Curtain opened

The song began

Heart pounded

Blood rushing fast

Butterflies fluttering

I opened my mouth

I sung

Nervous quakes

Soon went away

The Spotlight was on me

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Stryx commented on Spotlight

12-21-2009

Dear one - You MUST spell correctly - Is it crowed, as in crows, or the Crow Nation, or do you mean crowd, as in a group of people? Write with a dictionary, please. It will help your work. And make it easier to understand.

BrittKun

12/25/2009

LOL crows sorry!!! sometimes I don't catch something like that OMG Crows I'll fix it thaks for the help. : )

Stryx

12/27/2009

The correction works, and you poem speaks to all who have ever performed

Vampire commented on Spotlight

12-21-2009

Sounds like open mic poetry readings, brings back some memories.

BrittKun

12/25/2009

LOL

Teardrops commented on Spotlight

12-21-2009

You will do fine in life and dont be afraid to go and find yourself

BrittKun

12/25/2009

Thanks!!

bloomingsun commented on Spotlight

12-17-2009

I like this one, and I am NOT one who likes to be in a spotlight, so I understand the nervousness. I could feel the anxiety... nice write.

BrittKun

12/19/2009

Thanks Well a good writer is supposed to put the reader in the same turmoill as the character. Hope It was good. Thanks for the comment!!! : )

MootPoint commented on Spotlight

12-15-2009

I bet you have a nice voice. I'll read more of your stuff. :)

BrittKun

12/16/2009

I hope people like my voice I am told so but still get a little nervous. Thanks for the comment !!!! ; )

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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