SSToThePoint

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SSToThePoint

Short
Sweet
To the point.
Candles lit
Bed is set
If you say not tonight
I won't be upset
Just want to lye here with you
Maybe a few kisses too.
In the morning we may wake
Clothed or not
But at least We will wake
To eachother's face...
<3

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blueberry commented on SSToThePoint

06-25-2012

I love this one!...........I really like how you concluded it with a

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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