Stain

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Stain

The blood may
Stain,
Like a bad memory
The pain will
Stay fresh
For years to come
I may be young
However I know the
Pains of the world
Like any elder,

The fists may
Clench for wrong
Reasons
The sign of the
Changing seasons
The hatred will
Breed ignorance,
Would it be too
Much to ask
For a subtle
Acknowledgement?

The shadows of those
Before me
They burn,
Never will I see
The sun from their
Depths
Suffocate under
False grievances
It may be years
Until I can
Forgive myself
All these lies
Smile as you realize
You are the last of a
Dying breed

Made to hate
Afraid to love
Torn apart at the
Seams of these
Watered down dreams,
I've got the scars
To prove my
Thoughtless existence
This blood on
Our hands will not be
Forgotten

Useless to prove
Ourselves Now
Yesterday is gone
Tomorrow is too late.
~Kaitlin Platti~

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dahlusion commented on Stain

06-26-2009

Beautifully dark. Today may be gone but tomorrow is yet to unfold into magic—only if we create it in our minds first.

Platti

06/26/2009

Why thank you for the Comment! That's the problem, not many people can create it in their minds

xdavidabramx commented on Stain

06-05-2009

Oh wow, I like all of your poems!!! I don't like about half of my own though! You can express your emotions with control that I could only dream of possessing; I obviously have little control over some of the things that pour out of my mouth and mind; but you obviously do! I could never express this much control over something so hurtful, I get too angry and everything, especially in poetry to exes. xoxo

Platti

06/05/2009

Thank you so much for the comment! =D I know how you feel about control, in real life, I don't really watch what comes out of my mouth either, yet I seldom speak my feelings lol, and you shouldn't hate your poems, your poems I have come to find amazing, you express yourself eloquently especially for somebody our age lol...=)

StandingBear commented on Stain

06-03-2009

Live for today every day and search for a way to enjoy tomorrow when it arrives. Another kick@$$ write. 10

Platti

06/03/2009

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoy my writing ^_^

bellagal commented on Stain

06-02-2009

your words are so powerful. i know how you feel. this one is one of my favorites today. beautiful imagery

Platti

06/02/2009

Thank you very much Bellagal!

DirtyLilSecret commented on Stain

06-01-2009

That is an awesome poem.. and i can relate! I love your work! Keep it up you can express yourself in a very good way!! Congrats!! xoxox.. DirtyLilSecret

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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