starry eyed

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    starry eyed
    Moon is her Queen
    the stars whisper for her
    goddess of everything
    takes your breath away
    to take such small glimpse
    even if only bathed in nights grace....
    Moon is her enchantress
    sneaking, peeking under sky
    eyes closed, sending thought unto
    the one she yearns for

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    SuSpence commented on starry eyed

    05-08-2010

    The sun, the moon, the stars, I love it. I looove starry nights haha as if you couldnt tell from my profile pic. A lovely piece. I dig your style. -Spence
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    shakespeare commented on starry eyed

    11-27-2009

    I truly truly love it!..wonderful and creative. Thew style is enchanting..fun and direct! One of my favourites!
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    magati commented on starry eyed

    10-16-2009

    nice piece....but short u seem u had the words only didnt finish them..but good one..
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    cdeluhery87

    10/16/2009

    actually all that was wanted was said my dear but thnks

    bforibus commented on starry eyed

    09-30-2009

    this is hot. i wrote a similar one about the sun. a bit longer but not more moving or more emotional. great job
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    cliftondurant commented on starry eyed

    09-30-2009

    lovely poem of love the moon and the stars on a moonlight night make you think of love
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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