Starry night

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    P.s. i kow its rubbish lol but its a starter so im gonna continue to get a few idea's and get idea's from my dad so give me your ide's

    Starry night

    Starry night

    Starry nights are the best of them all they bring the moon out,

    If you see a shooting star your in for a treat tonight,

    The moon can be different colours red gold and blue,

    with a telescope you can see high all of the moons in the sky.

    By chloe joanne trapp

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    gallaxy commented on Starry night

    10-22-2010

    Not bad for a starter, and your only eleven. Add things like the stars consuldation like the big dipper and others. check ur enclyopedias on that and the solar ststem, the sun and planets. read up. Im sure ideas will come. And good luck in ur poetry, Im sure ur be good at it. I'll be lookin in from time to time see how ur doin...... (:
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    Cloarkell

    11/05/2010

    Thankyou so much :-)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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