Still

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  • Love
    • Kandrew
    • is so sorry she's been away so long! Trying desperately to catch up!

    Still

    You must admit
    of course,
    that I have
    loved you.

    And you, with your
    dark laugh and
    your brilliant wit
    will continue to
    pretend
    it doesn't matter.

    And it wouldn't
    have mattered
    if only you didn't
    love me back.

    But you did.
    I did.
    And we do

    ...still.

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    Artie commented on Still

    10-18-2009

    Wow this can be taken different ways - As two lovers admitting their love for the first time, as old flames trying to rekindle, and as two longtime companions. Beautiful write - 10 from me

    Paradice21 commented on Still

    10-09-2009

    Short And sweet ....yet easy to follow and nicely written!!

    kdavidscott1 commented on Still

    05-29-2009

    Excellent - I understand this to the upmost - for I have lived this myself - and yes we still do - beautiful Kandrew.... KD

    wordCollective commented on Still

    05-15-2009

    Time never heals a broken heart where love has truely existed

    pchone commented on Still

    02-06-2009

    short and crafted well,powerfull punch

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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