Stone Age Perceptions

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    Stone Age Perceptions

    If only man could see,that using others
    for personal gain is abuse.
    It creates neurotics of those that fall
    prey to playing it.
    Screaming demons pound that old saying-
    "Why can't I learn?"
    To love is natural.
    But not always taught well.
    To fall-
    To get up-
    This is what journeys are all about.
    Life and the tick of time.
    No matter how often it happens.
    It's always hard.
    It's always brand new.

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    lightcourier commented on Stone Age Perceptions

    05-04-2009

    Like a freshly picked scab!

    mspoetris

    05/28/2009

    oh gross. It is hard not to pick a scab!

    dahlusion commented on Stone Age Perceptions

    03-11-2009

    Perfect!

    countrypoet commented on Stone Age Perceptions

    03-11-2009

    Very well worded poem.Life can either be a beautiful journey in which we show love toward other people or a struggle for personal gain,with a high cost.

    bandit1192 commented on Stone Age Perceptions

    03-10-2009

    Well said. Life is a journey,we either learn or we crash. Wise words from a great poet. TS

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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