Stop
I've become quite goodat letting myself down
Lacking strength to make it work.
A juggler dropping balls
In over my head
grasping, grasping
Headache
Mindblock
between the hard place
and the rock
On the edge
teetering
NO PEACE
Stop
Stop
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at letting myself down
Lacking strength to make it work.
A juggler dropping balls
In over my head
grasping, grasping
Headache
Mindblock
between the hard place
and the rock
On the edge
teetering
NO PEACE
Stop
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toredbloodink commented on Stop
03-14-2017
- Peace... It is there don't stop... So this is you and I'll stay me... Don't stop in the endless sea
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03-16-2010
- Isn't it something how society expects women to be able to do everything? Take the kids to school after giving them a great breakfast, stop at the cleaners on the way to work, pick up the kids from school feed them all distribute them all to their games, and practices, have dinner ready, house clean, groceries baught, clothes washed, bills paid, everybody happy...but who cares if Mom is happy? Huh! As you say "Stop" That is what she should say. Excellent write.
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redbloodink commented on Stop
02-01-2010
- I felt this write... but now a days I don't feel like this......... red
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01-19-2010
- really good it shows a place dar as it is where we all go sometimes . I have been there not a nice place but its real
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