Stormy

10 Comments

Tags:
  • Erotic
  • ,
  • Passion

    Stormy

    Stormy

     

    Angel tempest guard my soul

    I feel your heart upon me

     

    Throw your fiery kisses

    Anchor me to love’s storm

     

    Hold my lustrous fury

    Bind our blinding thrust

     

    Dwell radiant and gleaming

    In eternal lust

     

    -M, Jacobs

    Poem Comments

    (10)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    whiteoleander commented on Stormy

    12-14-2009

    very sensual.. nice work have you read mine making love?? it takes my a whole page to place the same amount of emotion you do in a few lines bravo!

    danmartyjake1

    12/21/2009

    Yes. I appreciate your work very much. Thanks for noticing mine, as well.

    lunamarie commented on Stormy

    11-24-2009

    hhmmm ... what we all want, yes? ............ Luna

    danmartyjake1

    12/02/2009

    I'm glad you liked it. Thanks.

    knight4696 commented on Stormy

    11-23-2009

    This is extremely sensual ... A very nice job. Sometimes a few words is all it takes!! Great Job!! .... Ken

    danmartyjake1

    12/02/2009

    again thanks Ken, for reading and for your comments. I appreciate them and it is helpful to get feedback from others that see and understand the threads of your expressions.

    dahlusion commented on Stormy

    11-20-2009

    "Dwell radiant and gleaming In eternal lust" — so erotically rich in expression.

    danmartyjake1

    12/02/2009

    thanks for that. I sure needed to hear that comment.

    Grito commented on Stormy

    09-05-2009

    Luxurious and lacivious, diety of eros, cupid's shelter in the storm.

    danmartyjake1

    09/06/2009

    I like your interpretation of my poem, cupid's shelter, diety of eros,, thanks for your comments.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    danmartyjake1’s Poems (99)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Embrace Truth 3
    Testament of Un-Clutching 14
    Love Transcends All 5
    Something For Me 5
    Pockets Lined With Jade 3
    I Remain 7
    Forgiveness Haiku 8
    Nothingness 7
    Vampire Kiss 14
    Seething 7
    Baby Star 7
    Let Me Show You 6
    I Don't Care Anymore 7
    The Path Forward 7
    New World 20
    Message from a Scandal 19
    seraph seduction 29
    Meditation Haiku 12
    Flecks of Light 13
    Desire 8
    CODA 6
    Twins Haiku 5
    Night on the Farm 7
    For the Bereft 8
    Love Haiku 10
    Winter Haiku 9
    Vampires' Moon 13
    Huntress 12
    Dear Mommy 12
    Remembrance 10
    Loves Gambler 3
    Pirate Love 10
    Eternal Memory Kept 13
    The Only Way to Win 22
    Waiting 12
    The Message to Be 8
    Soul Riding 12
    Pray to Stay 7
    Naked Love 12
    Kismet 19
    Down to Pieces and Parts 10
    Bold Love 10
    Spirit Body 17
    Earth Love 19
    Away to the Garden 11
    True Friends 13
    Feathers & Light 10
    Thoughts on the Holiday 11
    Grief Abounds 10
    Dark Mossy Tree 7
    Something Preserved 4
    Ecstasy 11
    Angels Had Songs 23
    For Ardor 14
    Arise from the Assault 7
    Crossroads 5
    In That Place 7
    Rage 10
    Carry the Flame 52
    Lurks A Villain 13
    Little Son 10
    If You Don't Believe In Heaven 8
    Passions' Dark Embrace 9
    Swim Team 5
    A Trainer's Mantra 8
    At first Glance 7
    Perseverance 9
    America Rise Up 5
    Cyclist 2
    As Dusk Became Dawn 7
    No School Today 4
    Cheers for a Song 1
    At Mother's Tender Breast 4
    Innocence Departed 10
    Water Dance 11
    Honesty 11
    Innocent 3
    Nor'Easter 6
    Wind 7
    Stoned Love 7
    Dance the Dance 11
    Tribute 2
    Wonder 7
    All Proper Hollow Staples 5
    Stormy 10
    A Lover Knows 6
    Prayer's Light 8
    Child Dream 13
    Forgiveness Prayer 8
    My Prince 10
    Twilight 8
    Carriage 3
    A Heart's Song 3
    Barter 3
    Hearth 5
    Transcendance 6
    Clearing 5
    Fields of Jasmine 17
    A Little Part of Us 9