Strength, Faith, Promise, and Life

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    Strength, Faith, Promise, and Life

    Has your dreams broke you and your heart,
    because of little things,
    they caused a gap.

    Don't be afraid to stand up for yourself and to block the past.
    The strength inside is a powerful gift to carry you through rough times and good times.

    Faith, can help you fight back all the worst scenarios. Without it, good luck. Earn the faith of the lord and keep the faith. Don't let it go like a small toy.

    Promise yourself that you would change to a better person, but if your don't seem to believe. You've got nothing.

    Without a beautiful soul, of guidence and faith, there wouldn't be love.
    Your heart must become soft and gentle to others and understanding that everything doesn't go your way. Lifes tough, it's like a rock of rusty edges. It can knock you down as easily, but is hardworking to get up.




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    aysha commented on Strength, Faith, Promise, and Life

    01-04-2011

    I really liked the poem. I made me feel all those emotions. Amazingly written...

    optimistic commented on Strength, Faith, Promise, and Life

    07-16-2009

    Impressive very well written, and well said great metaphors to describe you feeling of faith and courage. This was an awesome write.

    Dreamer123

    07/18/2009

    Thank you very much! Wow!! I'm so happy for comment. :D Thank you Very much! God bless!

    Phoenix9 commented on Strength, Faith, Promise, and Life

    07-16-2009

    very good, i like the line about losing faith like a toy,way to important, you must always have faith

    Dreamer123

    07/16/2009

    Thank you very much! Thank you for your comment! God bless!

    Margot commented on Strength, Faith, Promise, and Life

    07-16-2009

    very awesome u have talent i really like this poem

    Dreamer123

    07/16/2009

    Thank you very much for your comment! thank you! I really appreciate your comments! God Bless! :D

    HopeOhlarik commented on Strength, Faith, Promise, and Life

    07-13-2009

    very good poem. just one thing you forgot. you have to have hope, to keep strength, and so on up. but like i said very good poem

    Dreamer123

    07/13/2009

    oh Thank you very much! For your comment & for your help. Thank you! God Bless!

    HopeOhlarik

    07/14/2009

    ignore this i dont know why it posted this here --_-- stupid computer

    HopeOhlarik

    07/14/2009

    ---_--- stupid computer ignore the last post. SORRY!

    Dreamer123

    07/14/2009

    it's okay I understand

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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