Striped of all dignity

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Striped of all dignity

Striped of all dignity

 

Striped of all dignity and all empty inside

confused about my circumstances I have lost any hope for pride

unconscious yet still awake, Feels like life is eating me from within

I don’t have any favor from family or friends

No house to shelter me, No job for my needs

Something is seeping out of me but Im too desolate to bleed

The wall are closing in on me, I have no room to breath

Yes I have run out of choices there is nothing up my sleeve

Bound from head to foot, I can see but don’t believe

That this is all that I have left out of everything that I achieved

 

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ahardwalk commented on Striped of all dignity

11-30-2010

I hope now you realize there is hope for you as long as you have breath in your body you have the power to make it through anything prayers go to you.. nicely written poem

redbloodink commented on Striped of all dignity

11-20-2009

writing isn't all in what we see as we read it lays in the true message some may never see... There is always hope and love .... some times it comes best from ones we don't know or never meet ..... Great work

christliked

11/20/2009

I love your spirit thank you

BoSweets commented on Striped of all dignity

10-29-2009

very nice write and so many feel this very same way.

christliked

10/29/2009

ty for your support read you soon

Redrose77 commented on Striped of all dignity

10-26-2009

wow thats really deep. I like what you said about feeling like theres no room to breathe.

Oblaidon commented on Striped of all dignity

10-13-2009

I think you meant "stripped". Seems a sense of hopelessness. No light at the end of the tunnel?

christliked

10/13/2009

this is just one of many poems and i enjoy several emotions and that is what was shared then. ty for your comments and I hope that the typing erors did not make it to hard for you to follow, but you did get the message hopelessness

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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