submission - things they don't teach girls

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    submission - things they don't teach girls

    mind spinning
    body brimming
    take me from my life
    touch me, teach me
    bite and kiss me
    your tongue likes my fire.

    drink me in,
    drink me down
    my rabbit hole is deep
    transporting me beyond myself
    you know what I need

    your hands so gentle on my skin
    caressing breast to hip
    while I shudder in exultation
    as you violently drive it in.

    throbbing, pleading
    exploding, needing
    more, and you give it to me

    all night, unending
    you're not pretending

    this is what I'm made for.

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    SweetSatin commented on submission - things they don't teach girls

    10-25-2009

    Very passionate! your gonna make me call someone to spill some passion on!

    cagallagher commented on submission - things they don't teach girls

    09-04-2009

    Again, povocative and appealling. I commend you on your talent and appeal. I certainly wiill read more of wht you have written. Ah, if only the days were longer- so that we might enojy our blisses in light of day. But thankfully, the nights can blur the lost and allow us more time to play!

    DARKPOET113 commented on submission - things they don't teach girls

    07-27-2009

    ah, the total submission to anothers whim. to be lost to mere sensation, nerve tingling, unbridaled sexual passion. to be taken like this, is to being totally giving in all ways. very nice work.

    JCKasper commented on submission - things they don't teach girls

    07-27-2009

    I not sure I understand? ....... It is certainly provocative and very expressive ____ Your last line leaves me filled with uncertainty and controversy ............ This is what it takes to make a great artist...... Your talent is undeniable!!!!!

    lithiumblack commented on submission - things they don't teach girls

    07-25-2009

    Great poem. Kinda reminds me of being 21 with an old girlfriend, alone on a hot summer night with her whispering in my ear. I find not only desire in this poem, but memory as well, like something culled from a vivid dream and made flesh. Beautiful piece.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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