Sunday Morning

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Sunday Morning

Eyes gently awakened by 10 o'clock sun,
mind groggily, reluctantly, following suit.
A smile played across my lips
as breakfast sounds dance about,
finding humor in the
broken eggs and nearly-spoiled milk.
Comical attempts make me love my
dysfunctional, fun,
weird family,
that even though its crazy on a Sunday morning
with my best friend beside me in bed
and the threat of Monday tomorrow,
somehow,
manages to work just fine. 

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papapaczki commented on Sunday Morning

01-10-2011

There's nothing like waking up on the weekend knowing you don't have work/school. Feeling refreshed after sleeping in a few extra hours. Nice poem.

brokenhearted11

01/10/2011

thanks

MindNumbing commented on Sunday Morning

01-05-2011

This reminds me a little of the Blue October song "Breakfast After 10". Not sure why, because they aren't similar at all... but I'm guessing it's just the 10 o'clock on a Sunday morning reference :) Regardless... this is fantastic. I'm a big fan of the phrase "My family puts the 'fun' in dysfunctional", so I connected with that part rather well. Nicely done.

kpeery09 commented on Sunday Morning

01-03-2011

Very Nice, its short, and awesome, keep up the good work.

brokenhearted11

01/03/2011

thanks, ill try xD

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