Sundown Saloon

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Sundown Saloon

Cowboys, cowgirls
all dressed in boots
each trying their luck
dancing the boot scoot

Lights dimmed low
wooden floor a glow
couples arm in arm
dancing real slow

The band plays on
into the night
I'm in your arms
you hold me tight

Alabamas' hit song
"It Feels So Right"
I just want to dance
with you all night

One more drink
ought to do
then we can go home
I'll make love to you

Can we come back
sometime soon
to dance again
at the Sundown Saloon

~Mary A. Eaton ~
2009

Tags: Boots, Dance, Drink, Saloon, Sundown

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Bettysrainbow48 commented on Sundown Saloon

01-08-2010

Your rhyming is very good. You are a good poet. Thank you for inviting me to read your work.

Mareann

01/14/2010

Thank you Betty for reading and commenting on my poem, Mary

Stryx commented on Sundown Saloon

01-05-2010

Hmmmm. Sounds like a one dance stand...'-) And it sounds like fun.

StandingBear commented on Sundown Saloon

01-02-2010

Yeehaw! A very well written work relating every country/western dance hall around. I have to cowboy up! " One more drink ought to do then we can go home I'll make love to you". Great!

gogant commented on Sundown Saloon

12-26-2009

Wow......you are talking my talk. I love anybody who writes poems with cowboys and cowgirls within. Heck, you even throw in a terrific group...Alabama. Great, just great.................g

Mareann

12/26/2009

Hey, thank you! I appreciate that very much. Mary

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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