Sunny Sunday Walk

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    Sunny Sunday Walk

     Instead of staying inside
    breathing dry stale air
    I went on an adventure
    on this sunny Sunday fair
    seeing snow slowly melting
    brings a smile to my face
    it's moments like this
    I don't wish to erase
    Breathe in the fresh air
    delight in Mother Earth
    closer to spring now
    and the rebirth
    let sorrows be kites
    that fly off in the sky
    let winter's cold doom
    pass us all by
    sunny Sunday walk
    frees my cold winter soul
    helps me hold onto hope
    and makes me feel whole

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    Tinytree commented on Sunny Sunday Walk

    03-16-2010

    I'm right there with you....Beautiful vision and reminder of what is to come. I agree your pics are great.
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    Springsize commented on Sunny Sunday Walk

    03-14-2010

    Your pictures are mega-profound, I love the way you go from animal to desert home, then tall castle and canyon paths and the flowers, they are my favorite view, until I hit the last one... the rainbow hue... And This Poem, of your three newest, is my favorite. tad Short, very sweet and wants green spring... will you have pictures of snow, when the summer comes like a long, hot ride in the back of a 1952 green Studebaker across the stretch of desert sand to town?.. or maybe a picture of a glacier for summer... you have magnificent views...
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    earthly

    03/14/2010

    Thank you so much for your kind words...........Earthly

    knight4696 commented on Sunny Sunday Walk

    03-14-2010

    Earhty ... Now this is the kinda walk I like! I so can't wait for Spring! :) Very nice write! :) Ken
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    MindNumbing commented on Sunny Sunday Walk

    03-12-2010

    Beautiful! Thanks so much for taking us on that walk with you!
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    jademelissa74 commented on Sunny Sunday Walk

    03-11-2010

    Wow! What an amazing journey...I could have kept on reading for at least 5 more minutes :)) I love the content, the innocence of life, portrayed into a beautiful Sunday walk. The inspiration that this poem offers is so well conveyed. I loved it! Thank you for that beautiful mind of yours. God bless~
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    earthly

    03/11/2010

    I so appreciate the comment my friend-TY...Earthly

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