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This is in no way a form of disrespect to those that have loved ones overseas or those that support our military.  This was written after many times watching the news and listening to the wrong focus of the war.  Reading the bottom of the screen and seeing numbers instead of names.  This has been a media portrayed war and many will suffer because of that and i feel this should never be the case when you are doing all you have to in order to make it home again.

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So it seems the towers got dropped and everyone somehow came together,
the cloud over New York was something of different weather.
America went to War against terror;
in the beginning, nothing seemed more clearer...
where's America now while we're still fighting that terror?

Are we gradually only losing,
we're still chasing that one man,
never accomplished that goal,
so many have folded their hand(RIP).

With soldiers still dying, did you forget we're still sending troops,
something gradually takes place and everyone is out of the loop.

The news should of never been involved if they didn't plan to stay til the end,
with distractions like that, America only lets down my friends.
War is so ugly and so far away, everyone wants to know,
like it so easy to watch on TV;
something like a gameshow!!!

How and Who the fuck are you to talk,
you have no room to judge,
when real Americans are fighting for you showing true country love!!!

While your stateside, we're fighting with those that hide,
we know the meaning of what it's like to have pride!!!
The innocent will always die;
Fuck...their sawing off our heads,
and you want to jail soldiers for doing what's necessary to protect his friends!!!

War is ugly, not for anyone who's not in it fighting....
Stay home, work your 9 to 5, shower at night, sleep in peace,
and keep your fuckng mouth shut as to what it is we do in these streets!!!

Don't look down on me because i have to kill, even it would be for the thrill....
IT'S NOT....
If I don't then my life they will steal,
I have people to see again, I have family and friends...

Fuck this country and fuck those that we fight,
at the end of the night...
I will lay my head and talk to the Lord, He's the only one to judge,
don't tell me what Ive got in store!!!

And for America getting confused, go back to 9-11-2001, watch those towers fall....
you'll realize why Im still carrying my gun, this isn't for fun, but someone with some heart has to make sure the job gets done!!!

Get Up, Stand Up and Fight for this shit like a true American
If you don't have the heart to fight this war and kill
at least support those that do...My buddies are losing lives and you just want to cry about your pathetic life!!!
It's Bullshit!!!

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Worthless commented on Support

05-24-2010

I don't just like this I love it!!! I wrote simular to this here and there after it happened but they wouldn't give me the chance to unravel those bastards pants cuz my knees are bad... Family genetics and It started as a kid. Anyway, I love the way you express yourself in this! No one will ever know what you guys go thru out on death row and It is far from fun! I could go on and on about the way this country is run but then I'd be considered a terrorists but the difference I wouldn't run! I stand up and fight throw it right back in their face make them break... The government is who i'm speaking of... I hope you make it thru and stay sane! God Bless!!!!!!!!

dumdumdj

05/24/2010

love the comment......keep em comin .....thank you

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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