Survival guide

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    • nini2323
    • I once knew everything, and now I know nothing.

    Survival guide

    children lost, in a city that never sleeps
    Left alone at night, mothers working themselves into a quiet desperate death
    And when she is gone
    They tell him she never cared and that if she had she would have been there more
    And he thinks: If she died in vain working her fingers to the bonebarely making ends meet and then died alone a result of too many years of struggle and no one noticed
    Would you blame him?
    For slinging on some random cornerso he could buy a ring to put on the finger of the woman that he would never allow to work to that quiet desperate death
    He will be notice
    She will be loved

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    hdmac commented on Survival guide

    06-11-2009

    Twisted poem, but interesting. It pulls you into a place of poverty and shows you the suffering of a woman.

    Phoenix9 commented on Survival guide

    02-22-2009

    very good poem

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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