SWEET SMELL OF DANGER

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There are times that love can be dangerous yet sweet. You want so bad to let go but wont for fear of not knowing what shall be. You rather then keep playing a game hoping it will never end. There's no need to sin when you feel guilty and have never done anything wrong or have you? this type of person comes into your life reviving you making you feel loved but you fear that if something happens you might lose the great relationship between you two... Its an endless game as I see it. Oh and not every poem I write is about me ;)

SWEET SMELL OF DANGER

Floating in air like a goddess 
Your voice takes me into a cloudless heaven.
Stand but my feet go numb longing for you.
I tremble, listening quietly unable to say a word.
Your stare burns inside me like a forest fire.
I can't escape, even if I wanted to.
My soul starts burning with desire
feeling the danger, but wanting it.
My heart keeps fighting my mind,
making me remorseful yet happy.
I have tried running away from you,
but my feet become numb again
I become cold, start freezing.
Before I manage to escape,
you come finding me almost dead.
You then warm me up with a hug.
Embracing as if you're trapping me.
Once again you enslave me,
wrapping me in your dark wings,
pleasuring me with your kiss.
An imaginary kiss I crave,
but don't dare allow it.
You hold my hand,
owning me--
possesing every part of me.
You kill me with your stare--
feeling naked before you
scared, but loving it...
Its too hard to hide sentiments.
You read me as an unread book
enjoying every new part you learn
anticipating what comes next.
Closing my eyes, all I see is you,
Smiling with pleasure I bite my lip
suddenly noticing you staring at me.
You devour me with your eyes.
I get scared, but wish you would.
With you its like playing with fire,
but knowing that if I get burned,
the ashes will keep burning forever.
It will be a never ending story of desire,
a continuation of a game that never ends.
Or who knows?, a movie of romance and love?





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Trista3 commented on SWEET SMELL OF DANGER

12-04-2013

That is quite a poem. it explodes with feeling. excellent write. well done.

poett

12/04/2013

Thank you

HIP13044b commented on SWEET SMELL OF DANGER

09-26-2011

This is quite a write; filled with passion, and loaded with a combination of emotions. Nice write.

Teardrops commented on SWEET SMELL OF DANGER

09-24-2011

beautiful . Heartfelt, wonderful and some what scarry peom I love it well done my friend Marie

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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CAN YOU STAND THE RAIN? 7
WHAT WOULD YOU DO 6
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THUNDER STORMS WON'T GO AWAY 1
OPEN DOOR 0
A ROSE IS ALL HE LEFT 2
I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS 2
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A LOVER'S FULL MOON 0
I WAS LEFT IN SOLITUDE 0
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ITS DIFFICULT ( ES DIFICIL) 0
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DEATH STOP TAUNTING ME 0
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In My Father's Hands 1
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I Wish I Could Just Fly Away 1
To Play 1
Everything Is Collapsing Around Me 0
Lets Divide It By Two 1
You Mean Everything To Me 1
It Only Takes A Minute 2
DEATH 3