Tainted RAGE

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  • blackfootlady
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So what was the Purpose of a question not asked? I believe it was to Be or not to Be? Read the Shakesperean Concept of the Angels if You need Be.It will be clarified there. It all about the Universal struggle Between Good v.s Evil.Some scriptures it is referenced as: Armegedon...The war of the Angels. In Nostradomus it the Great war of the reds and the whites......thats the image due as History is repeated and repeats....

Tainted RAGE

We Live in A World where Our Teens want to leave.
Where People vomit from merciful pains,bleed,and heave.
Where words of Wisdom's get voiced and torn down.
Where Our Children cry by darkness and frown.
Where talent is considered psychotic,suffocates,or grows.
In Our Place in time;where Wars We create Knows...
Peace is no where;not even glimmering in Our sight.
Still all We do is fuss,drink,lust,argue,moan and fight.
Destruction high,violence accepted,and murders peaked.
The word of God and A Bible;utterance is rated at weak.
In Schools I once learned Rome fell due to perfection.
When will this stop moving in the negative direction.
Some People making fun of Anyone We consider glad.
Ripping down the pillar of truth to choose the bad.
My tainted rage is what some People want to see.
If You can't change;Then I believe You will just let Us Be.
Is it really to late to build a better Quality of life to view?
Nothing Changed is nothing gained for The Image  Due.

                                  

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abuelita1 commented on Tainted RAGE

11-29-2010

Excellent write....powerful, strong words that paint such a true picture.

blackfootlady

11/29/2010

Why TY for such a powerful comment.I'm Happy You Enjoy the write.God Bless-Black

LenaM commented on Tainted RAGE

11-29-2010

What a strong piece deep soulful and hits you with a truth that can't be swept under the rug .!!

blackfootlady

11/29/2010

That how I get when it ruff during the Day when I watch the News.I can't look at. the News I get so disgusted. I can't believe it's gotten that Barbaric.It make Me want to stay home and vent it Out threw My Poems.Nice to meet You Friend.-God Bless -Black P.S.What A nice Comment By the Way.thanx once more....

carynontherhine commented on Tainted RAGE

11-29-2010

Love it!! Very true of our life here. I especially liked this ending If you can't change:Then I believe you will just let us be. Awesome write. Hugz

blackfootlady

11/29/2010

I can't take all the credit for My choice of words.God inside My Heart.I just try to tell what He wants Hear of Me in My deepest inner thought.I'm very Happy that Your enjoying My Poems.TY for such a Wonderful Comment.Keep writing Because Its All Good,God Bless Black

soulwriter commented on Tainted RAGE

11-28-2010

I APPLAUD YOUR PIECE - strong and true... the picture speaks volumes too... Write on and keeping living this STRONG

blackfootlady

11/28/2010

Ah I'm just a pebble The audiance is the Beach of sand.Ty friend for Your comment-God Bless-Black

MarionYost commented on Tainted RAGE

11-28-2010

Loved this... You have a way of pouring blunt truth out onto a screen with perfect flow. powerful poem. All the best -Marion-

blackfootlady

11/28/2010

Wow! Ty for Your comment.You are very good Yourself.God Bless-Black

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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