Taste

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  • Grito
  • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

Taste

You.
You like,
you like cake.
You like easy cake.
You like
the puffy,
the puffy cake.
You like
the puffy piece of easy
cake,
Delicious.

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knight4696 commented on Taste

02-06-2010

LOL! :) Ok Grito ... Cut me off a slice will ya?! Nice work! :) Ken

tierra7 commented on Taste

12-28-2009

Oooooh Ivan....Maestro.....i love this...sweet...and that's how love Anticipates.... MUY DELICIOSO ! Namaste..Terra@}-'-,- (10+ )

Grito

12/29/2009

Delicious, Delicuous!!! LOL!!!

danmartyjake1 commented on Taste

09-05-2009

Have you ever thought about lending your talents to marketing? I want cake!

Grito

09/05/2009

LOL!! I'm glad you got hungry, thank you for your visit anf great comments!!

BridgetBowen commented on Taste

08-20-2009

Uhmmmm cake...I like cake. You make it sound even more appetizing. Easy cake is the kind you don't have to make yourself right? LOL Very entertaining and mouth watering too.

Grito

08/20/2009

Yes! You don't have to make it yourself, just enjoy it Bridget! Thank you for your visit!!!

jademelissa74 commented on Taste

08-20-2009

Short, sweet, sassy! Very eye-catching. It made me smile. I do love the puffy piece of easy cake.... with a glass of cold milk though ;) Great write Grito!

Grito

08/20/2009

LOL! I'm glad you liked it, a cake in hand is better than two in the bush!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Grito’s Poems (148)

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Title Comments
Luz (De los Andes) ® 13
Doris © 5
G.S.S.E.G.B.I
.J.B. (Prose) ©
5
Blue Inca Night (Verse) 38
Collection Schedule 6
Red Shirt 7
Camisa Roja 2
Libre (Free) 6
Sundown Diner 12
Starry Starry Night 10
Letter 11
Whispers 11
Velas 4
Star's 10
Shade 10
Gold 5
Vanity 11
Borne 8
Is 7
Quarks 5
Storm 9
Nihilist 7
Return 7
Light (Verse) 9
Against the Current (Space Prose) 7
Blancas 4
See 5
Time 8
Esa 2
Answer 7
Silver 3
Days 5
Luz 2
Elevator 4
Taste 5
Actias Luna 3
Recital 2
Carousel 8
August 5
Dado 1
Terrace 3
Willow 2
Sueño 1
Blues 3
Shields 2
Choice 2
Encuentro 1
Canvas 2
Dreams 5
One(Senyru) 1
Rays 2
Temporal 1
Air 3
Vivo 1
Folds 3
Ave 2
Season 4
Sihouette 2
Sky 2
Two 1
Valz 1
Malla 1
Vuelven 2
3
Serious 5
Chance 3
Coto Laurel 2
Stars 2
Estrellas 2
Centavos 1
Stones 3
A 1
Laughter 4
Beige 2
Feather(AIXA) 4
Pennies 2
Powder 1
Vigil 1
Away 2
Kite(Wind) 3
Review(Violin
)
2
Sax 3
Bedlam 3
Fruit 2
Is Was (Stone Wind Water and Air) 3
Feather 4
Pluma 1
Wind 3
Vino 1
Ochos 0
Pleiades 5
Rest 3
Free 2
Palmas 1
Miles 2
Gaugauin( Haiku) 2
Shore 2
Asleep(Senyru
)
2
Ice(Senyru) 3
Harvest(Cinqu
ain)
1
Fruit 1
Form 0
Puma 0
Flux 0
Esperandote 1
Anduvimos 1
Aliento 1
American Rose 4
Wing 4
Balance 3
Anguish(Senyr
u)
2
Arc 4
Curso 2
Nado 3
Felt(Haiku) 2
Noche de Aixa 1
Visperas 1
Dias 1
Sailboat 2
Treat(Tanka) 1
Embrace(Senyr
u)
2
Celestial(Cin
quain)
2
I C 4 I M 8
Lapel 6
Coupe 6
Seed 8
World's Play (Words Splay) 5
Risas 4
White 10
She 6
Cream 5
Day 5
Flight 7
Aixa 4
Air, water and stone 7
Bosom 6
Safe 5
Rapture 8
Mirage 7
Canto(Spanish
)
5
Lips 14
Cresent Moon(Prose) 12
Ferns 6
Drops 10
Pass(Verse) 5
Snow Flakes(Prose) 6
Shell 11
Play 12