Tell Me

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Tell Me

Tell me how life should be.
Life, has knocked me down.
Tell me about eternity,
And the origin of your frown.

Tell me how love should be.
Love, has cast me out.
Tell me about humanity,
And the origin of doubt.

Tell me how death should be.
Death, is waiting for me.
Tell me about mortality,
And the origin of all you see.

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Maleficent commented on Tell Me

11-14-2009

I really like this altho it seems kinda unfinished... maybe you could expand it a couple of stanzas for a more solid end... it isn't that I don't like it... on the contrary... it's so good it makes me want more! ~ ☮

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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