Thank you, my dear friend Raleigh

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    Thank you, my dear friend Raleigh

    Oneday, I know a person named Raleigh.
    At that time, I did not know how inportant he would be to me.
    I knew that he was gentle and kind through the letters.
    I knoe that he was a good man. However, I do not know he will be such a good friend in my life!
    We met when it was in Octomber. It is fall, in such a peaceful and silent season.
    He always smiled all the time.
    He always humored and made laughs.
    Though he is a great boss, a great poem, a great founder, a great person who has experienced so much in life.
    He is a normal person but great. Cause he can chat with a little girl, who knows little about life.
    He is a normal person but great. Cause he likes to be good friend with a poor girl, who doesn't have money even a good work.
    He is great to me and all my life. I learn much from him.
    He is great to me and all my life. He teaches me what to do and how to do in all my life. A person should long for the right job,right life and stuff.
    A person should make money to supprot his/her family and themselves. But money is not all the meaning of life!
    Yes, that is just what I want to know. What is life? Maybe that is life!
    He enjoyes life just like an expert outside the world, who like everything of the world .
    Like sharing feelings with you, just like we two having been old friends many many years ago.
    Maybe that is what is friend. Having no age boundary, without any aim of money and economic interests.
    We just share the feelings of life inside. We can talk anything with each other and no worries.
    Thanks to the life! Life makes us meet and be good friends!
    Thank you, Raleigh, my dear friend! You make my life more rich and colorful!
    I have too much words to say!
    All in all, thank you life and Raleigh!
    May our friendship be everlasting!

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    ayyan commented on Thank you, my dear friend Raleigh

    11-20-2009

    I have read the poem step by step and understood your inner heart giving much importance to your great person. Love live your friendship. -ayyan

    Singing

    11/22/2009

    Thank you so much for your kind words.

    Phoenix9 commented on Thank you, my dear friend Raleigh

    11-06-2009

    What is life, so many things make it a life, one that is worth living, friendship, love,family, the list goes on, your life is you and to live it , you must love yourself so you will know how to love other, every thing else falls into place.....PHOENIX

    Singing

    11/06/2009

    yes! I agree. Wow PHOENIX, you are ma teacher of life!!! Thank you for so much kind words. I wii

    fatboy commented on Thank you, my dear friend Raleigh

    11-05-2009

    Nice. I do not know the meaning of life, but I do know the secret to a great life. Laughter.

    Singing

    11/05/2009

    Thank you fatboy!I will go on longing for the real life and I am glad that i made friends with you. I feel that i am so lucky!!!

    BigDaddyCash commented on Thank you, my dear friend Raleigh

    11-05-2009

    Thank you for joining my group of friends I pleased to have you as a friend. Real success begins with a friend and everything else in life is a bonus. If your dreams and desires are to become rich and famous and you set your goals to make this your main purpose in life, what good would it all be without friends? You should treat a friendship like a rose garden, feed it with love, kindness and understanding and watch it blossom into a beautiful rose. There is nothing more valuable than a true friend, all other successes in your life's journey mean nothing if you can't share them with a friend. LOL, BDC P.S. Let's see some of your magical creations. What I've read shows great talent, reading your poetry is a delight.

    bforibus commented on Thank you, my dear friend Raleigh

    11-04-2009

    I can feel the love and admiration that this character felt for its friend. Like being honored and cherishing the moment. I do feel like with such a emotion it lost its feel with the lack of adjectives. Either way. it was a commonly know emotion but you made it unique to you. so great job on that as well. overall i still liked this poem.

    Singing

    11/04/2009

    Thank you very much. I will learn more and write them better

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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