that amazing light

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that amazing light

and I searched for the light
that amazing light
better than the one that sweeps
across the water from the lighthouse
and when I set my gaze upon you
you smiled with your heart
as one couldn't without a soul
we had a definition
for our sight
a reason to uphold
looking towards the pier
to the marina
where business was selling lead
to the captains of the ships
talking balance without logic
for the benefits of stitched pockets
you and I could see
the illusions in it's green entity
from miles off
looking into each other's eyes
finding the reality of the balance
in its true form
so we look into the water
ready to offer our hands
and stay for those
who prefer not to drown

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Artie commented on that amazing light

12-05-2009

What an interesting piece - I love the way you ended it - so we look into the water ready to offer our hands and stay for those who prefer not to drown - very very good - 10 from me

boomboom56 commented on that amazing light

11-26-2009

You use words to their fullest usage. I think the way you use the ships and a watchful light are great. We all need God in our life at this time in history. Peace.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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