The beast is my world

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  • Confusion

    The beast is my world

    I dwell in the belly of the beast amongst trees I cant see through-
    the fogg is heavy and the smoke is lethal-
    The river is 100 proof and my soul is drowning-
    my old earth is wailing; kidneys failing-
    Illumination can be scary-
    The answers aren't evident nor are they a new president-
    The ultimate final destination...peep the occupation-
    Food for the soul ,but in this jungle it's cold-
    Friends shake hands over fist that clinch-
    33 degrees breed gorillas in the midst-
    48 laws govern the work place-
    That is life in the never ending rat race-
    1000 friends I know but I never knew,facebook and myspace the new pimps on the avenue-
    Positive Progression was the catalyst for all the aggression-
    Opposites attract like big wheels on Cadillacs-
    3rd eye is blinded to the fact-
    The beast is my world...

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    stackthelover commented on The beast is my world

    04-02-2009

    I cannot put my finger on it just yet! A 10 yes great wonderful work!

    TheLastPoet commented on The beast is my world

    03-29-2009

    my favorite type of poem...especially for those who can read in between the lines 10!!!

    WordSlinger commented on The beast is my world

    03-28-2009

    Masterpiece , I gave this a (10)

    NayInLove commented on The beast is my world

    02-25-2009

    this was hott

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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