The Call

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  • Jedi4Jesus
  • haven't been on the sight for awhile but had written a couple poems i'd like to invite everyone to read, What it's all about and You Promised

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I wrote this poem before church service on Jan. 11, 2009

The Call

I don't know where to begin as my mind starts to roam,

I just remember that phone call on our way back home.

The doctor called to tell us, "It's cancer I'm afraid."

And all I could do was sulk though my reaction was delayed.

I was shocked and I was saddened of all that I had heard.

As my wife's life flashed before me, for a moment it was blurred.

We both had cried and prayed together as though it was pre-arranged.

Though this time it was different...now our lives had really changed.

The thought of getting cancer had sent us both a shiver.

Like waiting to get that "lucky card" relying on the "river."

But as I remembered my "Lily of the Valley", the wife of my youth,

I had to go to the Bible, to sort thru and find the truth.

The wife of noble character of Proverbs thirty-one,

Were verses that I remembered and that the battle was already won.

You see my wife is just that person...so much so to a tee.

Though I cried in my heart of loneliness. I knew the woman that she had come to be.

So from the start of this process, this sort of cancer grind,

I'll fight my heart, and soul and strength to work on being "kind."

And this I've learned up to this point, and I hope you really hear it,

Though cancer may take your mind and body, it can't take your soul and spirit.

The un-invited-end game to some, may be their demise.

But it's actually giving "US" more Wisdom. A word to the Wise.

Ramil

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2teach2fly commented on The Call

11-20-2009

This I think is an excellent piece of poetry. Not only is your meter excellent but the words that you chose were very fitting. I know from experience that this piece was an "inspired" piece of poetry. My name is "2teach2fly". Please check out three poems entitled that I know came straight from the Lord and their titles are, "If Walls Could Talk", "Chosen", and "Charity". "Charity" is taken directly from I Corinthians chapter 13.

Nirlepa222 commented on The Call

07-09-2009

Wonderfully captured, real and Wise. I thank you for bearing it for us. Mahalo

MSVanallen commented on The Call

07-05-2009

Beautifully written and a gift of hope, giving us the reminder that we dont have to accept an end as long as we believe in a beginning...Thank you. MSV

WordSlinger commented on The Call

06-29-2009

I admire this poem for all reasons, and you roamed me to your strength, and your voice is so strong, thanks for caring, and sharing.

JadedJezzabel commented on The Call

06-29-2009

i love the flow and meter of this piece and the message you were wishing to express came across softly and then slapped me in the face with the cold hard truth. i love it.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Jedi4Jesus’s Poems (16)

Title Comments
Title Comments
LOVE 1
You Promised 1
What it's all about 0
THE DAY 0
I miss my mommy 2
Recovery 9
It is well 0
Grief 2
Why 4
Home Coming 2
Deeply Rooted 5
Quiet Desperation 3
Take Captive 2
My Walk 2
Bed Time Story 5
The Call 11