The Candle That Burns Too Quickly

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    The Candle That Burns Too Quickly

    The candle that burns too quickly
    Has a fervent flame that devours air
    Like many a starved jackal.
    This candle who's fire burns brighter
    By minute, brings about a waste of wax
    With a shrewd wanton shrug.

    How glorious, and great this solar torch
    Rears its head, for one grand moment.
    This illumination bright, and bold
    As a beacon point, is short seen
    And furiously fast in its fading.

    Then sight is lost to a darkened room.
    The walls reflect stained and strained bleakness.
    And where there once was light
    Now is simply black and burnt remains,
    Leaving hearts hollowed
    By a quickened candle's
    Insatiable consumption toward searing glory.


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    ginga commented on The Candle That Burns Too Quickly

    09-17-2009

    Bird, Ode to candlelight is my first reaction. A flame in all its forms and juxtapositions. The descriptions here are simply elegant. I really enjoyed this and can feel its heat burning in the afterglow! ginga
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    swiftbird2C

    09/17/2009

    What a great description of your personal reflection on this piece. Tahnks

    swiftbird2C

    09/17/2009

    What a great description of your personal reflection on this piece. Thanks

    swiftbird2C

    09/17/2009

    What a great description of your personal reflection on this piece. Thanks

    Merlyn commented on The Candle That Burns Too Quickly

    09-17-2009

    You are cursed with the sight. I feel for you.and with you. As life kicks us we stand. Don't forget to stand!
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    swiftbird2C

    09/17/2009

    This is a piece for those who lose sight of the need for endurance.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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