The Class Assassin

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Ill let you finnish off the story, make it as you please. anything from suicide to he got away. and look forward to more Evil Poems.

The Class Assassin

he sits alone in the back of the room
just watching everyone from morning to noon
his hood always up, he has long coats
everyone trys to be on his good votes

one day in the hot fresh spring
he arrived at school with a brand new theme
reflective glasses, brand new suit, leather boots
expensive leather gloves, feldora, and shoots

first one down, the class isnt surprised
they long expected this new demise
many do beg, some start to cry
he loads his revolver to fire in their eye

carefully in his new attire, he starts to preach
"more bullets for you, and some for the teach'.
I wish you would understand, my gun is my friend
together we kill, until the very end."

he walks out of the class, all are dead
time to begin with the school head
moving up to the office gun in sight
firing at any fucker who comes by

the school's in a panic, hes at the office now
ordering them all to bow
fires off copper candy into their head and walks out the door
and vanishes from sight forever more....

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LadyLuck commented on The Class Assassin

03-22-2010

'copper candy' i love that its freaking shweet! I love the picture here it's like a cool kid just chilln then pimps himself out and decides to pop caps in the whole school.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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