THE CREATION

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Join the P.O.E.T.S Platform of Environmentalists toward Survival

THE CREATION

The birth process start in the air
we act like we don't care
The breath, we breathe is the breath
of God
Blowing in the air, giving life everywhere

Look at the grass and the trees
the ocean, river and streams
listen to the birds as they sing. also the creepy
crawly things
And without reason, the birth of the seasons
it's in the storm, it's in the rain

Have we took for granted, forgetting this is
God plante

Humanity has gone in sane
Scientist playing a dangerous game


Do they care, they pour their mis-take in our lake
Which contaminate the three major elements
we can't live without

THE AIR... THE FOOD... THE WATER...
making life even harder

Pollutants in the air, kill plants and trees
that may cure our disease

We should be healing, yet we're killing

Can we see, we are all object of the enemy plan
lets stop giving him a helping hand
take a stand, and save our nation

We are God's

CREATION

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kdavidscott1 commented on THE CREATION

07-20-2009

I find this poem to be an excellent call for healing the world from the pollutions of mankind in various forms - polluting the land, air, and waters.... KD

ladypooh

07/20/2009

thanks again

spbsdude commented on THE CREATION

07-16-2009

Oh how true the words you write so beautifully in this poem. We need to remember that we are a part of the web of life on this green planet we are turning into a waste dump. Your use of imagery is wonderful. May we all work together to save our world from desttuction.

ladypooh

07/17/2009

Thank you for your comment

dragonfly1023 commented on THE CREATION

07-16-2009

this is a great message to be heard ladypooh. you really hit the nail on the head with this one. very strong words for a very good cause. love it. spread the word. join the P.O.E.T.S :D

ladypooh

07/16/2009

Thank you dragonfly for your comment. How do I join, what link do I use.

pinkbutterfly commented on THE CREATION

07-16-2009

B E A T U I F U L!!! That was beautifully said.

ladypooh

07/16/2009

Thank you again for your comment.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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