The darkness returns

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    The darkness returns
    I live in a world of darkness.All around me fear and dread.The look of solemn promiss.Not alive and yet not dead.This pain within me growing,feeding off my battered soul.The sounds of heartbeats racing,the hate begins to take it's toll.My heart is then consumed,within it's sinfull base.Death's demonic howlings,sounds of horror surround this place.With only my hopes and dreams,to keep me from going mad.I live here in the darkness,for the love I never had.........

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    Vampi commented on The darkness returns

    04-13-2009

    Very nicely put.
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    Fina commented on The darkness returns

    04-03-2009

    Very moving.
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    Christina13 commented on The darkness returns

    12-09-2008

    Wow! I love the way you make everyone, feel your pain.
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    beautifuldeath commented on The darkness returns

    12-08-2008

    beautifully penned.
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    LizzyBorden commented on The darkness returns

    11-13-2008

    nice job...
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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