The Dying Man

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    The Dying Man

    orchestrated words and flow,
    let go these regions of
    earth below.
    dreamers cast the residue
    that shines on high
    to forfeit noon.
    angel fall to demon blade
    and satin stain with
    crimson gold,
    velvet made,
    wage the war as
    shadow disband
    to wail
    thralls
    of lost command.

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    KING commented on The Dying Man

    12-06-2011

    interesting writing style that you have.It was a bit hard to follow at first because of how you wrote it, but the flow is there no doubt!

    PoetsofBlood commented on The Dying Man

    10-17-2009

    Short, and sweeter than sweet, i love it.....perfect"""""""""""

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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