The Eye

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    The Eye

    There have been a million bodies of mind own. Notes of boats, free & open for the sailing see of men, words, & worry warts. I learn from my ears, eyes, nose, lips, tips, and soul. I am able. I am whole. Scooped with a spoon.
    This is life, nothing greater. Nothing but reality shows, t.v. dinners, game show winners, & death.
    The doom and gloom of marriage to files and forms. Trees shaped like dollar bills spent on happy.
    Society is wrong. I've got news for you.
    It rains retarded & dull.
    Full of questions
    Where has the forest gone?
    My toes touch and focus.
    I'm in this place. I'm in this hole. I hear this heart. I play this role.
    What more can I do?
    Lights my path to a place I've never been. My goals go unnoticed. Filtered by my open lungs and searching. Eyes open like my mouth for water in the sun. Reading word for word, the choices and thoughts of greater men than I. My hands are shy, stay by my side, and wiggle for make believe. I keep my body close. I keep my body close. I keep my body close and safe. It's my mind that I set free, over and over, loosing pieces on the way. A trail of knowledge leads to my feet and up to my front door. The welcome mat so tattered from the people I adore.
    The eastern sea bay is home to my anxiety. Chello sir keeps serenading my destinations. I'm on my way to no where. To know where this place can take me.
    I am able. I am whole. I pour from the rim, to the edge, to the end, to the infinite abyss. I pour forever. I am so clever.
    This is life, there's nothing better.

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    nhorlandi commented on The Eye

    06-24-2010

    This is mind bungling, but I admired this work, I believe you have a unique style of writing, it's stop and go, but at least you reached your destination. Why the "EYE"? Explain pls.

    CatsMeow commented on The Eye

    01-05-2010

    Do you mind a suggestion? And spell of see to sea? Maybe a re posting like this might help the reader? The Eye There have been a million bodies of my own. Notes that says âboats free & open for the sailing.â sea of men, words, & worry warts. I learn from my ears, eyes, nose, lips, tips, and soul. I am able. I am whole. Scooped with a spoon. This is life, nothing greater. Nothing but reality shows, t.v. dinners, game show winners, & death. The doom and gloom of marriage to files and forms. Trees shaped like dollar bills spent on happy. Society is wrong. I've got news for you. It rains retarded & dull. Full of questions Where has the forest gone? My toes touch and focus.I'm in this place. I'm in this hole. I hear this heart. I play this role. What more can I do? Lights my path to a place I've never been. My goals go unnoticed, when filtered by my open lungs and searching. Eyes open like my mouth for water in the sun. Reading word for word, the choices and thoughts of greater men than I. My hands are shy, stay by my side, and wiggle for make believe. I keep my body close. I keep my body close. I keep my body close and safe. It's my mind that I set free, over and over, loosing pieces on the way. A trail of knowledge leads to my feet and up to my front door. The welcome mat so tattered from the people I adore. The eastern sea bay is home to my anxiety. Chello sir keeps serenading my destinations. I'm on my way to nowhere. To know where this place can take me. I am able. I am whole. I pour from the rim, to the edge, to the end, to the infinite abyss. I pour forever. I am so clever. This is life, there's nothing better.

    ginga commented on The Eye

    01-04-2010

    LO, A spectacular ride through the "Eyes" of this masterful poetic wonder. This has some seriously great visuals all wired for an electric thrill ride. WOOWEE! Love it! ginga

    AFIRIQUE commented on The Eye

    01-01-2010

    Beautifully written "Chello sir keeps serenading my destinations." hmmm! one of many great lines in this poem. AF

    Singing commented on The Eye

    11-05-2009

    yes! eyes is the normal but great things to us! Life is also the same ! That great. you can just learn the deep meaning of life. I feel so happy to you . i will learn the happiness from you

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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