the first one

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    the first one
    the first one to say hi
    the first one to kiss
    the first to say i love you
    the first to hold you and never think to let you go
    the first to give more instead of recieve
    the first to try
    the first to fail
    the first to understand when its going to hurt
    the first to cry
    the first to pick up the peices
    in the end the first will be the last to be happy

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    cagle64 commented on the first one

    06-17-2009

    hOW TRUE WHEN WE START WITH THE FIRST LOVE WE THINK IT WILL LAST 4EVER BUT IN MOST CASES IT JUST THE FIRST IN MANY THAT WILL COME
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    xxChristOpherxx commented on the first one

    05-18-2009

    brilliant and true. i can relate and i'm firstborn. keep up the good work.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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