The Forgotten Road
There is a road that nobody goes down anymoreand at the end
is me
waiting for my mail
The Forgotten Road
6 Comments
Tags: Life
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knight4696 commented on The Forgotten Road
02-06-2010
- Very well written expression of loneliness ... Emotionally conveyed in so few words! Great job! :)
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countrypoet commented on The Forgotten Road
12-01-2009
- Very powerful and sad words that you use here,but the message comes through loud and clear.The best way that I have found to move past the feeling of loneliness is to go to a public place like a restaurant or the library and try to start a conversation with other people.The more often that you do this the quicker that the loneliness drifts away.
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HarverTomsson commented on The Forgotten Road
12-01-2009
- It just seems that no one knows how to write a good letter anymore. Its easier to twitter...or text message. u think may b
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devaamido commented on The Forgotten Road
12-01-2009
- So you think, nobody goes down this road? Hey SV you're about to get run over.
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gogant commented on The Forgotten Road
11-30-2009
- Well, Spiderman, let's hope the postman still walks that lonely road, and that he doesn't have to knock twice. Short and to the point............way to write 'em.......................gogant
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