The Funeral

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    just a random poem that i came up with during school, god i have to much time on my hands XD

    The Funeral

    I walk in,
    everyone dressed in black,
    no one seems to notice,
    as i make my way,
    through the crowd,
    i see my family,
    trying to look dignified and proud,
    but in their eyes you can see,
    through the windows of shame,
    their sadness,
    their tears,
    and their pain,
    in from of the room,
    i see a casket,
    and what i see,
    makes my heart flee,
    " NO! IT CAN'T BE!"
    i see a face,
    so familiar,
    i see every day,
    i look in the casket,
    and what i see,
    is a face,
    a face that belongs,
    to none other than me.....

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    Shelbylolann commented on The Funeral

    09-03-2011

    Wow, babe.. This is... Amazing. I really like the way you put that at the end. Great poem!

    sk8erpoet commented on The Funeral

    03-08-2011

    this poem is cool..it captures the truth about funerals no matter who they are for..great write...sk8

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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