The great beyond

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    The great beyond

    I look into the stars at night,the swirls of blackness,twinkling light..
    I see above me all unknown,the great beyond with tales untold...
    The darkest shadows could not endure,with lack of light the darkness pure.
    To pass the knowledge gained from space,infinite worlds surround this place..
    The cosmos holds it's dangers true,but what does not,when ventured through..
    I look into the stars at night,for me to dream,of great delights...

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    Dano commented on The great beyond

    04-21-2010

    great expression... very vivid and real... nicely written

    BridgetBowen commented on The great beyond

    11-14-2008

    Nice one...very cool.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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