The Griffin
As the dark moon roars
The griffin soars
Into the dark of above
Within the grand mist
It seals you with a kiss
And you'll be lost forever more
The Griffin
8 Comments
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gr8lucia commented on The Griffin
04-13-2010
- Thanks guys for your interesting comments! :D §gr8lucia§
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Teardrops commented on The Griffin
04-10-2010
- you have a wonderful talent for writing of medevil griffins and one of my favorites thanks Maire
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Rhymer commented on The Griffin
04-10-2010
- I suppose the moral to this short excellent write would be to refuse the kiss of a Grifin. 10 from me.
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gogant commented on The Griffin
04-10-2010
- I can give no intelligent reason for my cause of enjoying this piece.......I just think it is terrific, and of course, it's short.............g
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EinStud commented on The Griffin
04-04-2010
- also, look up a synonym for "dark". Unless you are writing a commercial, repetition here is not so grand.
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