the light

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i love you shelby =) thank you for giving me light again.

the light

when i lost my sight,
you came along,
and made it right,
in the darkened path,
that i did tread,
you showed up,
and shone like a beacon of light,
re-lighting the flame in my heart,
creating a torch,
that i still carry,
keeping my path a-light,
no longer do i walk,
shamed in darkness,
but rather i bask in the light,
all thanks to you,
my darling,
so please stay forever,
and love me always,
all me to bask in your light,
by your side,
to enjoy it pleasures,
always,
and forever,
with you.

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Shelbylolann commented on the light

08-30-2011

I love it. Good... No... GREAT poem. I have to say that when it said Beacon I saw it and read it as Bacon LMAO.... Anyways, great poem baby(: I love you.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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