The Love of My Life

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    The Love of My Life

    For all that you have done, are doing, and will continue to do
    I am honored and grateful to God
    that He has given me you

    like water mixed with ice
    given to someone to quench their thirst
    when the temperature (a) rise
    so does your love,
    for you are the love of my life

    You are the sun,
    giving in abundance-rays of compassion,
    but like anything that is too good-too perfect
    it appears difficult at times to believe that this is truly happening

    For so long, I have been searching to find Mrs. Right-
    I was decieved, and only found what was appealing to the sight-
    but then came you-like a dream of the night-
    pivoting my heart, my mind, and my sight
    and like a people united-willing to fight for their possessions and rights-

    in like-manner, from this day forward-as you are becoming my lawfully wedded wife-
    I will cherish you for the gift that you are-I will fight for our love-for you are my blessing-you are...the love of my life.

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    shakeme4life commented on The Love of My Life

    09-08-2010

    You're on the right track , keep doing you , you have the gift of delivering a message through rhyme ... lyrical blessed one

    deanne commented on The Love of My Life

    04-27-2010

    AWESOME!. Good to know that somebody still believes in GOD, LOVE & MARRIAGE. Thats a triple threat!!!

    cbilliard commented on The Love of My Life

    03-04-2010

    wow i like this indeed. it felt like you were talking about me there for a minute.lol but this is so endearing and felt like you wrote it with true conviction..

    FlowerGirl commented on The Love of My Life

    02-28-2010

    Hi Ceasar, Hope All Is Well I Really Enjoyed Reading This Write..Very Nice. Pure and Sweet In The Friendship, Attraction And Mutual Respect Between Man And Woman In LOVING HARMONY. Be Inspired! and Forever Be Blessed!

    BoSweets commented on The Love of My Life

    11-28-2009

    nice write. its a beautiful feeling to be in love; you know sometimes we find a love that feels so right til one day we wake up and it feels like everything has changed over night. your blessed to have found your gift of life. peace BoSweets

    Ceasar

    11/28/2009

    I really appreciate the comment, but this poem was not written for a special someone in my life-as strange as it may seem, when I wrote this poem, I was not in a relationship, and still today, there is noone special there. Again, thank you!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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