THE MOON DISSOLVED

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  • Erotica

    THE MOON DISSOLVED

    night crept through my window
    as I lay awake in
    melancholy disquiet

    the stars liquefied and flowed
    like honey
    sensually coating my body
    igniting me
    leaving me a glowing ember
    seething with impotent lust

    the moon dissolved
    pervading my senses
    with a silvery saccharine narcotic
    singeing my perception
    with smoldering hallucinations
    of eroticism

    but oh, the temptress moon
    smelled of your sweet essence
    and left me high with wanton desire
    unconsummated
    as night crept out again

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    redbloodink commented on THE MOON DISSOLVED

    03-20-2010

    this write is full of intensities..... awaking the human senses and perplexing the mind to find erotica....... red

    bobarobbob commented on THE MOON DISSOLVED

    09-10-2009

    wow, i feel like i should smoke a cigarette. Great imagery here. I enjoyed. :o)

    kittman101 commented on THE MOON DISSOLVED

    08-27-2009

    i simply love the creativity you put behind your words. i could never imagine reading such eroticism and feeling well lustful. but sometimes when the mind speaks we all listen, and you write so divinely. rthanks again for sharing

    diggz commented on THE MOON DISSOLVED

    08-17-2009

    I like this, is this new? Very sexxy with a nature touch!! vEry good.

    dahlusion commented on THE MOON DISSOLVED

    08-06-2009

    I love the erotic intensity, steamy longing, and the divine horny-ness you describe here, so much so that the tip of my tongue glazed over.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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