The morning

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The morning

The morning

 

Dew sets on the grass

Light flickers like happy memories

My soul greets the morning rays

The fall leaves float like feathers down the street

As old life exits the world

The cold wind whips my face like a taskmasters whip

It is almost winter.

Frost Covers the dying grass as it mourns for the sun

Walking on the street I can feel the earth all around me

As the cold air enters my mouth

I can feel the piercing cold of the coming winter.

Breath Appears like a ghastly figure

It’s morning

 

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tanmayC commented on The morning

12-23-2009

you paint a picture in my mind of the morning.....great work....

BrittKun

12/25/2009

Thanks tanmayC!!!

Platti commented on The morning

12-18-2009

I really like this one for some reason, there are just a few spelling and grammatical errors, nothing too big, but good job :3

BrittKun

12/19/2009

what are they Erros so I can fix them.!!! Thanks for the comment!!!

Paige commented on The morning

11-06-2009

Short, but awesome. I love the description u r giving. Great Job!!!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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