The Naked Canvas

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    The Naked Canvas

    Your manhood wisps
    the skin
    of my lips,
    and the buds of my tongue
      dance
    in anticipation.

    Each vein
    holds the beat of your heart
    pounding,
    as you glide deep,
    fitting like the final
    piece of a puzzle.

    Hot, sweet nectar bursts,
    nurturing my delight
    in pleasing ,
    and reminding me
    of an art,
    as old as man.




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    Hanna commented on The Naked Canvas

    07-08-2009

    as uperiorsensual way to describe making love or having sex- truly an art as old as man or perhaps older- beautifully composed

    kdarcy commented on The Naked Canvas

    05-23-2009

    An excellant write, great title, fitting like the final piece of a puzzle ... great line- the other, as old as man. I'll check your others

    lightcourier commented on The Naked Canvas

    05-04-2009

    really nice work!

    aggieprof commented on The Naked Canvas

    04-18-2009

    Makes me hot and bothered. Very well done.

    Drivingczar commented on The Naked Canvas

    04-15-2009

    A most pleasant heat has swept over me leaving hot embers in it's wake! Suddenly i feel relaxed and weak! Great write!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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