The Nap

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  • Lost Love

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    For that special someone that seem to be there one day but when I woke up from a nap he was gone.

    The Nap

    I took a little nap today and woke up feeling scared. I dreamed my baby wuz holding me then all the sudden he wasn't there.
    I began to cry and try to think back and wondered why.
    There was a time when we where so happy together.Loving each other oh so free.
    Now it's only me.

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    CraigStyle commented on The Nap

    04-04-2013

    Looking back on old poems, thinking of past relationships causing you to remember and feel old feelings... I had that moment or moments. remembering where you were vs where you are sometimes better or worse....wondering what happened to FOR BETTER OR WORSE. Life...
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    Crush commented on The Nap

    09-29-2010

    i like this because it is a great love poem, but on the other hand it shows how fickle and uncertain love can be.
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    FLAWLES commented on The Nap

    09-17-2010

    Next time you go to sleep, dream another dream. Cause some realities, aren't what they seem. I'm gonna pray for you. It's just a matter of time when a smile appears on your face; and you'll say "he's all mine.
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    GucciGurl

    09/17/2010

    AWWW THANK U FRIEND I HAVE MISSED U.... THIS IS AN OLD POEM BUT I STILL REMEMBER HOW IT FELT

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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