The Never Said

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    just another night of regret

    The Never Said

    in an absurd way, i wanted you to stay,
    because now after, my memories are poor strangers,
    sitting alone, i pick at them with my tongue and bone,
    alone, crazy isnt it?
    how we let it all go?
    we both wanted it so, so , so fucking much,
    how did we lose the
    trust,
    the touch
    so many nights spent side by side,
    a miracle to love someone,
    in a place i never had to hide,
    never had to unwind, unravel,
    this journey canceled, now i travel,
    youre in my pocket,
    my heart in a locket, tarnished and missing pieces,
    to earth with this grief
    my remnants of belief i use to find others,
    my fears i control because i must console and smother
    put a smile on my tragedy
    and pretend there is another meant to be
    cycling through me, i cant see, i just feel
    now i breathe in real slow and i let it out
    and i say hello to her, and she pretends to care about me...
    its enough, it has to be enough,
    i hate that its so fucking tough,
    to let someone go, its a goddamn show,
    its never been real,
    for years and years i assume that i can feel,
    but i know, i know...
    im losing everything i was before

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    JayJ420 commented on The Never Said

    06-16-2010

    sounds miserably thought through thourogh, and yet peaceful

    JellyBeanPuddin commented on The Never Said

    08-26-2009

    I've gone through this quite a few times... but mostly wondering if I, myself, were good enough... i absolutely adore it:D

    tenderpoison commented on The Never Said

    07-23-2009

    your heart bleeds beautifully and anyone who's lost love knows exactly what you're saying....how do the damages mount so high that they cannot be overcome? excellent. 10

    AmadeusEx

    07/23/2009

    thank you tender, if you can, id love a comment on my newest, Tree

    popi1668 commented on The Never Said

    07-22-2009

    Very well done brother, it's not often that we run across a poet that can release the inner self in a way that gives the reader a more in depth look at pain in it's entirety.Gave my thoughts something to think about!!!!! KUDOS Peace and Blessings

    AmadeusEx

    07/22/2009

    thank you popi...this one definitely hit me pretty hard too after i finished, its great though that you enjoyed it as well

    AmadeusEx

    07/23/2009

    ps if you can, read my newest one, called Tree

    Minerva22 commented on The Never Said

    07-18-2009

    "Put a smile on my tragedy", I wish I wrote that. I kinda agree with you though, breaking up and then trying to be...civil I guess its like putting on a show. Trying to figure out how to just be. I like how you phrased this, great job.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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