The Never Said


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    just another night of regret

    The Never Said

    in an absurd way, i wanted you to stay,
    because now after, my memories are poor strangers,
    sitting alone, i pick at them with my tongue and bone,
    alone, crazy isnt it?
    how we let it all go?
    we both wanted it so, so , so fucking much,
    how did we lose the
    the touch
    so many nights spent side by side,
    a miracle to love someone,
    in a place i never had to hide,
    never had to unwind, unravel,
    this journey canceled, now i travel,
    youre in my pocket,
    my heart in a locket, tarnished and missing pieces,
    to earth with this grief
    my remnants of belief i use to find others,
    my fears i control because i must console and smother
    put a smile on my tragedy
    and pretend there is another meant to be
    cycling through me, i cant see, i just feel
    now i breathe in real slow and i let it out
    and i say hello to her, and she pretends to care about me...
    its enough, it has to be enough,
    i hate that its so fucking tough,
    to let someone go, its a goddamn show,
    its never been real,
    for years and years i assume that i can feel,
    but i know, i know...
    im losing everything i was before

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    JayJ420 commented on The Never Said


    sounds miserably thought through thourogh, and yet peaceful

    JellyBeanPuddin commented on The Never Said


    I've gone through this quite a few times... but mostly wondering if I, myself, were good enough... i absolutely adore it:D

    tenderpoison commented on The Never Said


    your heart bleeds beautifully and anyone who's lost love knows exactly what you're do the damages mount so high that they cannot be overcome? excellent. 10



    thank you tender, if you can, id love a comment on my newest, Tree

    popi1668 commented on The Never Said


    Very well done brother, it's not often that we run across a poet that can release the inner self in a way that gives the reader a more in depth look at pain in it's entirety.Gave my thoughts something to think about!!!!! KUDOS Peace and Blessings



    thank you popi...this one definitely hit me pretty hard too after i finished, its great though that you enjoyed it as well



    ps if you can, read my newest one, called Tree

    Minerva22 commented on The Never Said


    "Put a smile on my tragedy", I wish I wrote that. I kinda agree with you though, breaking up and then trying to be...civil I guess its like putting on a show. Trying to figure out how to just be. I like how you phrased this, great job.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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