The pain from a Black Rose

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  • kpeery09
  • "Never Compromise not even in the face of Armageddon"-Jackie Earle Haley as Rorschach from Watchmen movie

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This is based on what the girl that I did call my girlfriend throw at me...she threw misery, darkness, and inner hate.

The pain from a Black Rose

I tried to love her,
but she never gave me the trust I asked in return.
I tried to let her mistakes in the past go,
but all what she gave to me was pain.
I no longer have any love,
the things I used to love are no more.
Now,
I keep weilding,
and weilding,
and weilding,
like the black flower that I am.
There is no more to my soul, but what she left behind;
now you all must know for what my heart no longer has.
I have no more faith,
I only believe in my chosen place.
She said she loved me,
but all I saw was Misery.

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NJay commented on The pain from a Black Rose

05-26-2010

you really wrote about me in your poem. you are really great. the lines flows and keeps me in space. Good work friend

Sydney commented on The pain from a Black Rose

05-26-2010

this is a great poem. i see alot of imagery. i agree with terrel. but i kept on reading cuz you wrote it with such extraction from the reader. Sydney

terrellharrisjr commented on The pain from a Black Rose

05-25-2010

Wow man, you choice of words and content make one want to stop reading, but the way you craft this poem forces me to continue till the end. I applaud the effort you must have put into translating your emotions into written excellency. A 10 for me.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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