~The passing of time~

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I use to have a English Teacher that would always say, Your time will pass, but will you. This poem is for Mrs. Daily for making me understand the concepts of patience! If it was not for her wisdom I would never had read, or composed any Poetry!

~The passing of time~


Today is here, yesterday is done,
Tomorrow starts quickly,
when both have slipped along.
The night creeps in, the day stops by,
Twilight unfolds briefly,
In the middle of there bliss.~

With the day travels the light,
The night unfolds the day,
When they both fight to survive,
twilight stops in to play.~

In the darkness evil rises,
In the day evil sleeps.
When twilight comes around,
She even outs there needs.~

Today is now done,
Yesterday has past.
Not sure what the future brings,
I will leave it in,
old man times hands!~

~Inkmaster~

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redbloodink commented on ~The passing of time~

02-22-2010

the long day that past.... was today glad it's over..... nice write Ink.......! red

inkmaster

02/23/2010

thanks again for the comment...ink

knight4696 commented on ~The passing of time~

02-06-2010

Jeff - I love the wordplay in this one and the way you convey your thoughts. Nice job my friend! :) Ken

inkmaster

02/06/2010

Thanks again..Early morning words that run out of me, with Java! Jeff

Maleficent commented on ~The passing of time~

02-05-2010

dreamy write... *sigh*... twilight hours... aren't they great...? ;)

inkmaster

02/06/2010

Twilight is the in between of the dark and light...Thanks for the comment...Twilight is my favorite time also...jeff

soulwriter commented on ~The passing of time~

02-05-2010

I like the playfullness mixed deeply upon the serious side of dark... You do have a way to craft words and thoughts in such a way as to make the reader take notice... thanks always for sharing your talent.

inkmaster

02/05/2010

Thanks Jeff, Some days the java in my large coffee cup, shows me the way, Jeff

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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