The Player

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Just be honest in your relationship friends.

The Player

The player of emotions are motivated by selfish gains,
He or she will play you in night, day, shunshine or rain,
Love is full of highs and lows,
Up and down when emotions flow,
It doesn't mean that it's allowed,
To lead him on a leash of cloud,
Be straight up and tell him the truth,
Get to the bottom, get to the root,
Play not with one's emotion,
When love out there is plenty as an ocean.

Does it not matter that true love may not be,
In play here for one to see? 
True love is not for a treasured few,
If you found true love it's kudos to you,
Taking joy lady in playing around,
Your walls of secrecy will fall to the ground,
That's why I'm telling you to tell him the truth,
Get to the bottom, get to the root.

Stop playing games, doing it all the time,
I've seen many a passionate crimes,
Be not a player, be not wild,
Humble yourself, be like a child,
Take stock and look at yourself for awhile,
Playing with emotions let tensions run wild.

Stop the playing around girls and guys, be focused,
Preventing anger unleashed like wild locust,
Think of your future and of stability,
A stable relationship of sensitivity,
Understanding that life is a short one to live,
It's enjoyment is determined by how much you give,
To build your lover with hope and happiness,
Joy and even great respect with togetherness.

Playing around achieves nothing friend,
For many the result is unpleasant ends,
See the world and enjoy it together,
Cleave to each other like birds of a feather,
Unified and strong affairs as durable leather.


Poemeater 2011.
   
 

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Rhymer commented on The Player

01-08-2011

Nice write, enjoyed the technique and style. 10 from me...............

Poemeater

01/09/2011

Many thanks my friend. You comments are appreciated

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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