the poem of many things in one

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i know that this isa very jupy poem, but basically im trying to tell my girlfriend just how mcuh she has helped me and how much i love her, and that even though she says i cant, i want her to let me hep her in the healing of things that have happened. i love you so much baby <3 please allow me to help, just i allowed you.<3

the poem of many things in one

you have such a loving heart,
one that is made of gold,
it is courageous,
it is loving,
and it is very bold,
you always speak your mind,
and tell me when your sad,
or happy,
mad,
or anything else for that matter.

you are the most amazing girl,
i have ever seen,
i know you have a troubled past,
but its okay,
so do i,
and even if you say i cant heal your wounds,
its okay,
i shall still try,
you are worth my every breath,
that i use on you,
and honestly baby,
you have no idea,
just how much,
i love you.

they say a picture is worth a thousand words,
well your voice is worth a million,
and every time i see taht smile?
it only adds a bazillion,
and every time i hear your laugh?
you guessed it,
another quatrillion.

i dont know how to put it in words,
but only actions you see,
because baby,
its really siple,
you mean the world to me.

you saved from a world of pain,
catered me,
and dressed my wounds,
and now that i am fully healed,
you have taken me fully as your own,
and now oh my,
just look how much we've grown,
in just these short 8 months,
we have only increased,
our love,
our needs,
our wants.

i know that some will say,
"you cant do it, no way"
but i always say,
"you dont know her like i do"
"she is more amazing, then ANY one of you"
how we got so strong in our love,
they will never have a clue,
but i think taht deep down,
we both alwys knew,
that you were meant for me,
and i was meant for you.

so basically what i am saying,
is you have healed me,
more then you knew,
it isnt possible to fully fix what has happend,
for either of us you see,
but now that you have healed me,
my question is,
will you let me heal you?
just as with me,
i cna never fully fix what happend,
because it cannont be undone,
but i want to try and help heal,
what i think i can.

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jj1562 commented on the poem of many things in one

02-20-2012

i loved it she really really means a lot to you that is very evidient in this and i loved the million billion quatrillion brazillions thats teh ninja i know it made me smile well best of luck with the rest of ur lives

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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